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The chapter was good. But I felt that MC would cut the villain in half with his cleave just like Sukuna. But it looks like we have to wait for it. Anyway the chapter was good, and I hope you have some sort of outline and know where things are heading.
And he can also have a army of children too right 😆😆. Just kidding. But I am really curious about the romance root, since he really love his wife.
well the chapter was great. But why did he kill him though, couldn't he have try to recruit him or something?
one more thing, please try to break down the paragraphs some more. Honestly it's scary 😅
This chapter was good. Although I would have like a original appearance of the mc. But overall it was on the right track. Keep going author.
Well in the original work Wikipedia it was given as both gold and metal. But I'll admit gold sounds much better.
Yes, you are right. I will fix it.
Yes, I have fixed all chapter 3 naming spelling mistakes. Thanks for informing me.