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sewerslvt2dKommentiertIt 200% is 😭
'As if my singing is that bad...'- sewerslvt4dAntwortet auf wolfdstroyer
Jellyfish summon
"Is that so?..." She paused, taking a moment to think for herself. "Then I shall have to ruminate on your words, Dave. However, as I am right now, my confidence is nowhere near the point of matching your friend's. Until then, would you kindly take this little one along with you? I know this is asking too much, but she truly deserves better, especially after all that she has been through." - sewerslvt5dKommentiertCh 190 Veil of Deception [3]
- sewerslvt10dKommentiert(Insert RNG God's verdict pic.)
- sewerslvt10dKommentiert
“You cant feel it” 🤓☝️
"....I can show you." - sewerslvt12dKommentiert
Please use ‘example’ for thoughts.. it’s wayyy less confusing to read that way
"That hurt....somewhere that hurt..." He thought. - sewerslvt15dKommentiert
While the writing isn’t bad It’s like a major plot hole because the mc is 12 doing crazy stuff and no one is questioning it at all. You can probably mitigate this by just going back through the earlier chapters and making him just a year younger than ichigo instead so that it makes more sense. Especially with how he acts, it’s not like a kid at all.
"Thanks for the compliment, Riku. You know just what to say," she replied with a playful grin. - sewerslvt15dKommentiertCh 24 Chapter 24: Bossu~
- sewerslvt16dAntwortet auf BridgeToHeavens
Real man ☹️
That's right. Its been 10 years since that day, 10 years since Issei had lost his parents. Ophis had become the closest thing he could have to be mother ever since he lost his. She was always there when Issei had called for her, she helped him awaken his sacred gears and was always there to listen to him whenever he wanted to talk. - sewerslvt16dKommentiert-Impregnation Bonus: [2x2500]= 5,000 MSP
- sewerslvt17dAntwortet auf SoulsBorne_Lover
Deserves better 🫤
"Ah," her voice possessed the same distant quality as Melina's, yet lacked the hint of melancholy. Perhaps it wasn't the past that held her captive, but something else entirely. "A Tarnished..." Her voice trailed off, a keen gaze piercing through the mask's eye slits to fall upon him. "A mage as well." Her form seemed to solidify, a hint of wariness replacing her initial surprise. "Why have you sought me out?" - sewerslvt17dAntwortet auf FeralLover1
Basically the guy who wrote the theory of unconscious actions
When making a jump you don't actively calculate the distance, right? Your unconscious does it for you. So why can't it do more than that? - sewerslvt17dKommentiertCh 7 Time For An Upgrade
- sewerslvt20dKommentiert
Calling march a TikTok egirl gotta be a sin 😭😭
Eventually, I turned a corner to see two figures running past me. One was a tiktock egirl with her pink hair, weird outfit, and holding a bow, and the other was just some dude who looked like he was cosplaying a Genshin character with a spear. What was that guy's name again? Ciao? Mao? - sewerslvt20dAntwortet auf ObamaUchiha
It wasn’t bad to read tho. Definitely painted the picture clear
He wore black traveling garb, once shimmering with enchantments that faintly glinted in the dying light. Silver accents, once may have been fashionable, were now dulled and tarnished, mirroring the state of his clothes. The garments themselves hung in shreds, whispering tales of a thousand battles endured. In between his hand, a violet staff pulsed with glint-stones of the highest caliber. - sewerslvt22dKommentiertCh 43 The Journey
- sewerslvt1mthKommentiertSLAP
- sewerslvt1mthKommentiertCh 12 Finally got a PC
- sewerslvt1mthKommentiertCh 5 Rush
- sewerslvt1mthKommentiert
OMG he’s actually going to turn into an acceptable character !!?
[Sister Seeker: Yeah, Don't be like me. From what I saw in the source material, I am somewhat of a yes-man kind of guy. Especially if it is the girls I am close to asking me. I also need to toughen up a bit, I guess.]