Fantastic story and world building, a few grammatical errors, but not to the point you can't understand whats happening. The main protagonist is written well, no complaints here. The only thing I have a CON about is the uploading of chapters. The story is really great but we only get uploaded chapters every like few months, other than that really amazing novel. I will not be going into detail as to what makes it amazing and great, you'll have to read and find that out yourself!

please upload this story more, if you get the chance love this story very much!!!!! Thank you for the chapter!

Nooooooo, I caught up!!!!!

Thanx for the chap!!!

Thank you for the chapter!!!!! Can't get enough of this story!

awwwww~ I love these father-son moments!!!

thank you for the chapter!!!

re-reading this story and I wouldn't mind seeing a short cute story of them being reincarnated into cheetahs, one with gray eyes and the other with brown. That would be so cute!!!

Tank ye for te chap!!!!

Show him what you goottttttt Scarlett!!!!!!

Tank you for te chapter!!~

Poor ace as well for being dragged into it lol

pfffft, poor Adrian, if one must suffer then all must suffer!!!

I enjoy this very much!!!!

Thank you for the chapter~

Hahahaha I always enjoy Adrian's and Hannah's interactions. Also that very small tease of the future. I'm really looking forward to knowing what happened, can't wait.Thank you always for the chapters!!!!

ooooh i wander what minas talent will be, excited and wander where the 10th soul orb went?

Hahahaha he put his own foot in his mouth for the trouble pfffff.His explanation was perfect, chefs kiss [img=recommend]

oooh busted~