steel17

"smoke rolled off his skin like living snakes" that makes no sense whatsoever

abyss born eyes? you should stick to words that you can imagine because what does abyss born eyes even mean

i dont like that you keep using abbreviations

mc thinks he can change the future and looks down on everyone but to be fair if i was reincarnated in a world where i knew of its future i would also be the same

read for the premise of the story but stayed for the comments

this is such a long ass arc and its been going on for so long its boring but its important so I'll endure i just feel like it would have been better to include some other things to stimulate the brain

author must be feeling it to update this often

I'm talking about in writing all my reasons are have been about his writing why are you bringing the most random stuff