I am quite easily satisfied, not going to lie. Still, the previous sentence has not much to do with what I am going to say about this story, or at least, I will try to be as observant as I can. Also, I really like Lit-rpg. Aaaand, it's my first review too. Grammar: Even with the devil in the detail, the author still does an amazing job of constructing great prose. Unusual for this genre, but I am not one to shun a good meal Style: it's perfect, no problem for me. Characters: There is a lot of potential in there, given how Clyde interacts with the world How will his previous acquaintances react? What enemies will he make? What allies will he make? Eager to see all that.