NightroPulse

Funny how you still don't get it. Your trying to argue for one specific instance. I'm complaining about multiple, not just concerning Ryota. It piles up. At least try to understand the topic and reason for a complaint before you try to start debating on it. The situation with Ryota is just ONE of the supportive examples, not the topic. Your not making any good points here. It's how and why those original "side characters" show up, and how it relates to a repeated similar pattern. But I'm just gonna assume here that you don't know the difference between good and bad writing, since you can't see the obvious in front of you.

(PC) What is with this triple spacing bug, lol. I've had this issue with the review section for a month now. Does not appear when windowed.

Grammar is good and word count per-chapter is great. The plot is good and isn't just an insert with no changes. There's canon divergence and extra original characters. Overall, it's an interesting read. With it's originality and number of chapters + word count, it's one of the handful of upper tier SI/transmigration DB fics I've read. And I've read a lot of them. Though I've found the four star Dragon ball as a button, seemingly as some sort of medium to open portals to other universes (omniverse) to be kind of odd, instead of just opening the portal as an inherent ability. But it's the DB universe, so it's not that out of place. The Toriko universe also plays a huge role in this story, but not the main role. I, however, never watched/read Toriko, so there's nothing I can comment on in that area. There were some hiccups in terms of canononical knowledge, but the author has shown a willingness to fix such mistakes once pointed out. That's a lot more than I can say about most other authors that don't even bother fixing grammar mistakes when pointed out, yet have the time to thumbs up and or comment. [Ctrl]+[F] people, it's quick and easy. Don't let them pile up with the excuse for a rewrite which rarely ever comes about. Consider the experience of your future readers.

You can argue that it makes sense all you want, and it does, him being a good scapegoat at least. But your completely overlooking my point regarding the constant and convenient coincidences. Yes, the constant stacking of the situations, including the happenstance of him and the MC randomly meeting (prior to Ryota obtaining the mangekyo), to this situation, is indeed a coincidence. And no, I'm not insulting the original author, I'm insulting their work. If they don't want to bother making new random characters and instead want to constantly and conveniently recycle them, that's on them. Stop trying to -simp- *cough* defend and make excuses for authors when complaints are within reason and justifiable. All that does is enable bad writing and prevent growth. My complaint is completely warranted. Those amount of coincidences obviously don't happen in real life, nor do they happen to this extent in anime/manga/cartoons.

Yes, I'm fine with that. But there gets a point to where it's just too much and you can't enjoy the story. Just like the fics where more word count is spent in the MC's head on average than is given to the story. If an author does both, it's even worst.

You too, Mister 'I Can't have a conversation without putting words in the others mouth, drama maker.' 😉

🤷🏽‍♂️ Yet here you are with a post, made solely to try and get a rise out of me to respond. I won't say anymore directly on the subject, just point out that there was no disagreement for your statement to hold any value. Your arguing for something that isn't there and I don't know how many ways I can point that out for something so simple to get through your thick skull. Not only that, you've been making up nonsense assumptions about what I want in every of your comments, without any reasonable text from me to go off of. Like in this instance about you somehow concluding that I want "deep drama" from this. Really? If "childish=retaliation" is anything to go off of.... Your deduction skills are horrible. Quite frankly, if I'm being an ass, it's because you deserve it. Like I said in my second reply to you, "All your counter points flew off the mark," time and time again. Are you a troll, or are you really this stupid? 🙄

🤣lol, really? You need an example of how to not be no-nonsense, childishly aggressive and edgy, to no-nonsense, aggressive and edgy? Pretty sure the OP said it pretty well for this instance, or were you not paying attention? I'd just change it to walking up to him close and personal, call him out on his bullshit, and state just that. An attack would then depend on the Hokage's next words or actions. The thing is that he resorts to violence too quickly without threats, subtle or otherwise. Not much thought is put into said actions, or a bare minimum word exchange. His patience bar is way too low for any reasonable exchange before he takes any aggressive action. The original author probably thinks this is a cool and edgy personality, and maybe it is, but is approached in a childish manner. The issue you seem to have is that your trying to excuse his childish approach to his behavior, just because no one can stop him. Yet me and others are not disputing that. Just stating that he does so in a childish manner, and that flies over your head. Just because someone does something in a childish manner and no one can stop them, still does not change the fact that it was done so in a childish manner, even if the result ends up being the same. People WILL develop opinions on those actions regardless, so your whole argument is pointless. This isn't about making excuses to not use violence, it's about how you get, and how you present yourself, in getting to the same point A and point B. Now stop wasting my time just because your an idiot who can't understand such simple things. At this point your arguing just to argue, so I won't be responding to you anymore.

Okay, then let me put it this way. How does acting less childish and by association, more mature, equate to being submissive and having a fix-it attitude? Flexing in a more mature manner than the childish knee-jerk reactions that the MC has shown numerous times, does not mean you can't have a no-nonsense attitude and can't make threats. "Different mindset"? Please~ The MC is a reincarnator. You seem to have a limited definition of the word 'mature' and what it means to not act childish. But with a seemingly chinese account sounding name like yours, who knows 🤷🏻‍♂️, you may be used to such story character personalities.

😂 It seems the very basic stuff I said flew right over your head. None of your implications apply to what I was referring to. All your counter points flew off the mark.