Plz tell me what i need to work on any feed back will be nice so i can make money for my sick grandma thank you for anyone reading my story its good to know someone is reading my story's

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good book an we have more ill even pay asmuch wanted i really hope for more this is one of the best books i have ever read im not going to lie

i love the actiion but also im wondering how do you make a comic book seems difficult but stioll love the hard work putted in thats why ill give a 5

chapter 5 is good but the problom is you have to put a lil more action im not going to lie so yeah im not going to wais my time on a book that aint have much action

aggree

bro / female /both are you a mind reader

lol so am i

cant aggree more

nvm i actualy do like it i take my comment back imsorry

its a good book i will not lie but im litterly using somuch passes so idk i would give it a 8 still im not a hater so ill give it a 5 but still goood work on it

im wondering is this book finishd? sorry im just worried that ill be reading a book thats not finish so far im in chap 5 i love it great story so far