Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is quite good too... I like this kind of story (slice of life with little fighting and adventure between).. I like that MC/Yuga continue his parent daycare (although that because his system, but it still great).. His system is good too, it give many reward to make MC daycare more success and famous (pokeblock recipe, incense recipe, Evolution Stone Vein, etc).. His quest is also relate to Daycare and not to forceful (it give a long time or no time limit).. I like MC is caught Pokemon with limitation (not destroy that pokemon ecosystem/not caught all of pokemon in one spesies).. There a few flaw, like the data of your pokemon is bad writing sometimes.. The inconsistent of he/she.. Not give a women/mate for MC.. Etc Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 👍😁😍😍😍

It's a good Game Maker fanfiction!! 👍 It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like this kind of story.. To see what kind of game MC/John will make.. How he make it.. What reaction of the players, etc... Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍😍😍

It's a really really great Fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a really great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... It so interesting to see MC/Adrian became a God of Creativity and how he get a believer and prayer/Divine Point.. How he modify/advance his Internet.. How his interactions with his follower/believer, etc... I want to thanks author sama for how long is each chapters.. I think this will be one of my favourites story... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Fairy Tail fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I love the idea of Magic Net/Internet in Magic World.. It's interesting to see what applications MC/Nate bring to Magic world.. I like his interactions with other Fairy Tail characters.. But I think he became OP so quickly.. Just a few months and he already have magic power as high as Laxus.. Keep up the great work author sama.. Love your story 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great multiverse fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It's interesting and good story, but it will be greater if there's a little bit romance.. And make more MC daily life in Food Wars world (like cooking in his restourant, his costumer reaction, make new menu, etc)... He should use his power to focus to get unique ingredients in another worlds.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍😍😍

Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! 😍😍😍 This is one of the best (cooking & slice of life) fanfiction!!! 👍👍 It have a very great plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this kind of story (cooking & slice of life) where MC get system which improve his cooking skill little by little when he done his quest/mission.. MC/Sui system also give him an change to buy more fantasy ingredient which he already get first from mission/quest.. I think you should give him more fantasy recipe, he only have 5 for now?? I like so much MC/Sui interaction with others (Erina, Soma, Polaris dorm people, etc).. But I think you should give him more interactions in his original world people (Luna, his Rep Class, Utaha, etc), you don't forget that he still highschooler in his original world don't you author?? You make him so busy in Totsuki world, than he only back to his world to open his Snack Bar and sleep, than back to Totsuki world.. And why he don't go to 2nd world?? I think it's still ok if Tohru still with Kobayashi, he can do the 2nd mission by get fantasy ingredients from 2nd world.. He can befriend Tohru, Kobayashi, etc with his cooking skill.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍

It's a very interesting and funny Harry Potter fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is quite good too.. But there's few times the author write wrong names, like Quang Zhi?? And Li.. Although I know who they are, but it still not good to see wrong names.. I like MC/Lawrence characteristic and interaction with others(especially when he prank Gred and Forge), it's so funny.. I don't mind a little chaos in Hogwarts, it's make the story more funny and refreshing, but please don't make MC overdid it (a little is fine, but not too big).. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It interesting to see MC/Eisen became a professor/teacher in Hogwarts.. But why Astronomy?? Muggle Studies is more good choice.. First, before Quirrell is become DADA teacher that year he's a Muggle Studies, so he could be a Muggle Studies without change other teachers.. Second, he's muggle before so he can teach Hogwarts student about muggle better.. I like that MC/Eisen got a cheat/system.. But maybe you should explain better how the system work author san.. And it so bad that he only get 1 Miracle Traits each year,, maybe give him another way to get it (so automaticly he can get 1 each year, but he can get more by doing/reach something?)) Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great Lord of The Ring fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. There's not many interesting LoTR fanfic to read.. So it make me so happy to find this one.. I never played LoTR game (just read the book and see the movies), so it will be interesting to see where this story will go.. He already change much (Thorin and all other dwarfs still alive), can't wait what else he will changed.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the good work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like that although MC reincarnate as Ash he not just copy original Ash (his adventure and Pokemon is different).. I like his bond evolution (it so cool), but doesn't it too much that all his pokemon can do bond evolution?? But it's ok.. Just my opinion 😂 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the good work 😁👍👍😍😍😍