Vacaar
Author of The Sun God's Awakening (SGA)
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Thanks for pointing that out, it should be fixed. Tell me if it isn't though.
That means a lot! But I've tried to hint at what his personality is like, but I feel it's disconnected at times. So I'll try my best to make it top-tier.
You're right, it doesn't really reflect a lot of the things that happen in the story. I will rewrite this chapter and a few other chapters since the writing and character aren't all that consistent later on. (I'LL TRY MY BEST AND THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK).
he's laughing cause he thinks it's a joke???
I used prompts and sentence structures from chatgot, writing was by me
This really fell from grace, the world-building, the lore, power system were pretty much top 10-15 wn and the character interactions weren't bad. But it got abysmal when the MC started to act randomly and the pacing decreased for no apparent reason. The direction from cultivating to more slice-of-life wasn't integrated well and it didn't do it much justice. After 1500-1600 chapters, the quality definitely dropped.