Thank you so much for the review. :) On the characters behaving that way. It's true that they act like children and I do that on purpose. I'll try to look back to see if I can cut back on it if it makes some of the interactions a bit odd, but overall I would say that the fact they do that is pretty important to the story.

Since every other author is giving their own novel a review I will too. (Shameless 5 stars btw.) This is the first story I've ever written, so do expect it to be a little rough, I promise it will get better, so please stick with me. If you have any feedback at all, I would be ecstatic if you could share it with me. I'll do whatever I can to make this story better.