Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

"Well, that sucks.." best last words in front of a vampire

the story concept is decent, the pacing varies thru the story. At chapter 1116 the translation goes straight to shit.

dude you're not even the best in school in your craft.... jack of no trades

the MC is ki da terrible. he has unlimited mana but doesn't use it, he complains others are getting cockt but he's worse. if it wasn't for the system related tasks he'd probably struggle to improve with his attitude.

he went dark real quick...

made it to ch 129 only because it was temp free and I had nothing to do. I'm starting to understand why the step mom in his first life didn't like him. The MC likes to think he's an adult in a kids body but he's a arrogant moron in a kids body. The system is lacking but has options for him which he doesn't use until it's too late and the plot armor kicks in.

the writing is done well and flows. some of the world building skips around but you get the overall picture. the MC goes from calm and calculated to insidious... kind of off putting

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

that's me!!!

they don't tell you the whole story because you make rookie mistakes quite often and repeatedly.