umm why r ya making him hide his powers and even face I understand that it's necessary to stay humble I still don't like these nuisances 😔

May you never find true happiness fuc u hope that u slip and fell and may you dream of getting ganged up by orcs in your dream

Ahem why do I kinda like him though hmm

Wowww as expected of you just like your other works this one got me hooked up in the first chapter hope you continue this very nice no grammar problem till now as I have seen good luck (:

Just for the sypnosis it looks like a good plus you removing those things I hate in other novels you deserve this lol keep up the hard work 🫡

Btw it's me your friendly neighbourhood Ace

Well my friend I left reading for quite a month and well when I come back I see your masterpiece. Continue doing what you do dude you are doing awesome I am only at 5th chapter but I will make time to read it whole and tell you 😇

Naina*

An awesome book as always author-san the flow of story is nice along with character buildup, I didn't find any grammatical mistakes so a plus point, it's just 10 chapters but the story hooked me up as your other books it's very nice hope you continue your work as always and I liked Nania's character quite a bit can't wait for next chapters

I mostly don't read FL but this book got me hooked on it, The Character design is awesome I like the female Mc here and the plot is also good there are many things left for the future which is quite nice the pace of the story is also good along with that I didn't find any problem with grammar it's easy to understand love this book hope the author continues this awesome work

A nice story with good character design and grammar was also good overall worth the time and money Very good work author

One of the best books I have read keep weiting📝 its quality is top notch👍👍👍

I wish the same.

Well a nice romance novel for me to read and envy the main characters who got there love 😢

This book has potential, the writing quality is good not any major grammar problems, till 5 chapters I will change the if there are problem ahead

Except for the long paragraphs, everything is nice, I hope the author has some motivation to rewrite it

Bro, I am writing a rewrite of this read that

Preeti smith

Arya smith

I don't have money bro😢