Ryo_Toujo

you're doing great, Seas <3

Contrary to the synopsis, whats's within this novel is more than just a cooking story. Sekai-Ryouri is a work that has many layers, and transcends genres. It has the competitiveness of a sports series, the twists and turns of a drama, enough gags to be humorous, tugs at the heartstrings like a romance, and can even be very heart-pumping like a suspenseful work. And though as of today and this writing, all of that may not be present, it will be in the grand scheme of things. It is not perfect. I don't think that any work is. But if all of the above - or any of the above - interest you, I highly advise you to take a look inside of the world of Sekai-Ryouri. Hopefully you'll come to like it as much as I do.

lmaooo

i really enjoyed the tone established early on, as well as the character interactions and reactions given. the worldbuilding is excellent, and its very easy to get into this book despite not truly knowing what'd you'd be getting into. i can't say i have many (if any) critiques so early on, so i can definitely vouch this as a good, immersive read! the hard work is made very apparent!

large fan of how vague this chapter is, and the implications of what many of the events that occurred will probably come back later. feels like there's foreshadowing throughout.

she's so fcking sick

of course! i'm looking forward to the continuation of your work!

i love how despite Matt's entire world had been altered, its still very grounded in reality. i still have yet to read the third chapter, but it was very cool to see that even though he had found motivation in the agility point, his body was literally too weak to get him there. many stories would just have the protag bs their way to the goal, but it's really good to see the pacing the author has used. the only critique I have is really loose, and one that is one that many of us still have to get accustomed to doing, and that's showing rather than telling. but I will admit, that that's more nitpicky than constructive, and a skill gained with time. With where we are now, I'm very excited to see the progression of this story.

Three chapters in and its easy to tell that this book is one that paces itself quite well. Aside from a major shock in Chapter 2, and the semblance of one in Chapter 1, the story moves at a gentle pace- initially at least, It likely isn't everyone's cup of tea, but what room there is for shock value, is instead replaced by character interaction and dialogue - something I feel is equally important within a story. So in short, come for the overarching plot, but stay for the characters that develop thanks to the world within!

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