PHOENIX_U
•𝕾𝖊𝖑𝖊𝖓𝖔𝖕𝖍𝖎𝖑𝖊•𝓝𝓸𝓽 𝓪 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓯𝓮𝓼𝓼𝓲𝓸𝓷𝓪𝓵 𝓦𝓻𝓲𝓽𝓮𝓻:'( 𝓪𝓷 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐭 𝒘𝒉𝒐 𝒘𝒓𝒊𝒕𝒆𝒔 𝒔𝒊𝒎𝒑𝒍𝒚 𝑭𝒐𝒓 𝑭𝒖𝒏 ƪ(˘⌣˘)𝐈𝐠- phoeni_xa2
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I'd love to, it would be better if u could add the link(^‿^)
I’d do my best to explain but yes I’m not a mature writer and not someone who wishes to judge your writing skills Or efforts. But yes I would love to more of your work in the future ; At the beginning of the paragraphs if you switch the speaker (when mc is talking with another lead) break a line (adding gaps). If a new speaker came up with new beliefs or ideas (who's not your mc/Main Character ) you can add a line break (gaps) depending on the dialog Long paragraphs are good in detail when you're giving ideas about what your MC and what they're doing but If they move places into new events forward with times Or backward use (gap) to separate the paragraph. Information that is not related to them should be distanced by (add gaps and change the paragraph ) Hopefully this help, PHOENIX.
I have mention it before those chapters got delete from the device i was working but don't worry i would try to add them soon as I can , they were in rough drafts so it's taken time for me to edit them again but surely it'll be done . PS: Sorry for the inconveniences and Thank you for ur patience. PHOENIX.
But He IS!✨
*I'm
well it's a way to relief so why not.
clothes are not the problem gurl it's the narrow-minded people
Some mysteries are going to unfold soon
*z
She screams Rich! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧
Hopefully soon she will be so soft ,so cute (≧▽≦)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
lol◉‿◉typo mistake thanks for correction