Leiden_Dez

I hope the bride won't be in the harem of the original hero? I have a bad feeling about my sister.

MC's changes in his relationship with this "future wife" are shown very superficially

Where did this love come from? If the original Theos did not feel such emotions for her, then the one who read the novel fell in love at first sight?

Another God who is easier to deceive than stealing candy from a child.

I really stopped understanding what was happening. Why is he unguarded? Why these embarrassing conversations during the fight? After that, the MC will blame others for the lack of common sense.?

So where's the realism now? Again, everything returns to the domineering spirit that makes others trust mc, although he has not demonstrated the necessary qualities for this.

the end of the chapter was very alarming. I hope this is not another loser disguised as a "villain" and the next chapters will not break off the engagement and ridicule and mockery of the protagonist.

What???

That's why I hate villainous novels. I just don't accept the concept of luck in them. You can't kill the son of luck, why can you steal his chances? It's just a disgusting convention that allows the antagonists to live as long as the author wants.

MC of course, the author should be thanked for the fact that his system is not one of those that tortures and destroys the host at every step.