Diana_Rast

Get in the way

Your mom was a human you’re is a contraction of you are…the grasp of the English language is awful so many grammatical mistakes and I haven’t made it through the first chapter

Not what the witches have fortold and.. you are to be married to a human not into

Was Standing in the foyer present tense. Or Xavier stood in the foyer is also correct..

Seriously this girl needs to stop her piss poor pity me routine. She sounds like a toddler throwing a temper tantrum.

Padded to the kitchen is the correct phrasing

Story was all over the place… the grasp on the English language was not good. So many spelling mistakes and wrong pronouns used. Also uses wrong verb tenses. The book started off well and just went downhill the longer I read. I wanted to like this book but all the spelling mistakes and bad grammar made it hard to enjoy

Reserve the first dance