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Yogurt_Garcia

Yogurt_Garcia

Lv2

I am high school students trying to make novels for fun. They are based on my dreams so I hope ya enjoy them uwu

2021-12-02 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Jhassi

    Sorry for not posting today. I am traveling at the moment.

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    I started reading to chapter 130 of the manga. I decided to give this a try. It was pretty much the same, creative funny and amazing to read.

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Yogurt_Garcia

    Oh, I guess it was my device, after clicking read it showed it spaced out.

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    The novel was well written. Everything was great other than the fact everything was cramped together. Maybe it was my laptop that made it seem like that, but yea if you fix that then it would have been a 5*.

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    Sorry for having to review my own content. I want to apologize for what I am going to do. I plan on remaking the chapters. My novel didn't have too many words to start with. I won't be deleting any of the chapters until I have made chapters 1-5. Hope you guys understand

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Antwortet auf globmand

    I was planning on remaking/reworking the novel. This advice is quite helpful,

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    Hello, I hope you guys enjoy this novel. It might be a little bad now but I will improve. If I get more than 50 valid views and maybe around 5 collectors, I will change the novel cover for every holiday. I already have the novel cover for xmas. But please enjoy the novel

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Anony_Mous_1902

    Lol, I am American, I just put I wasn't good in English cuz I am bad at spelling.

    Dieses Kapitel wurde gelöscht
  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    A classic novel following the vampire CEO. I have read a few like this before but I guess this one stands out from the others. So good job. I also don't get bored while reading so that's a plus[img=recommend]

  • Yogurt_Garcia
    Yogurt_Garcia3 years ago
    Verschickt

    I may have not read past chapter one but it is pretty good. I couldn't understand the phone call since it was two people talking, kinda hard to tell them a part. So fix or keep practicing on writing novels.