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[img=faceslap]send me to hell ? Dumb shit I ever h heard.
I think he tryna get the holy affinity so he can drink deal with the situation back in the death realm
The new beggar sect
[img=proud] umm that’s wayy to much
I have seen other books like this. Let me guess he will get his vengeance on the family but his main foucs will be the demons. Tbh if this ever happens to me I would let the demons do most of the damage n I help them from the side not physically but I would steal their lands n wealth while they fight to survive.
Is there a discord anywhere ? Cant find it been looking around.
I want rank 1500 lol he better pick that no offence but he dirty weak rn lol.
Man smoked half the continent for ur ass if he ever in trouble u better ride out or ima find u
read p to 31. writing is good nothing to complain about. world background didnt see much so nothing to say. Story Development is meh tbh so far just copy from other books but can improve i guess. Character Design here i the main issue, i dont care if an MC gets involved in plot n either helps or steals from MC, but i will not tolerate one that lies to himself or works his ass off to get noting from it or be treated like shit. He saved MC then has to deal with their bullshit. Like unless the MC is the only one that can kill the demon king, then there is no reason to be his fan girl. Like Author POV the MC had to save that guy cause his mana was the only thing to save the world like deadass. So idk be more independent, and its pretty f ed up that u want people to die just to keep the story line. if it happens without u doing anything then ok. but to work hard to make it happen is crazy u basically killed them. Idk everyone can read it and get their pov themsleves. just know he is a villain that doesn't want to accept he is one.
just Ren now