Thunder_XTEH

It's a great story but lost interest when Alex became Adrian and when it became premium(the economy is hard)

Is it possible to reduce the paragraph lengths, makes it harder to read otherwise very good

Its good, but for 25 yr old he gets excited way too easily. I would recommend adding the threat levels, cultivation levels and anything important in auxiliary tabs

I have returned

I am sure you will do better over time

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It is good, but the writing quality bleached my eyes, I will come back eventually

Eventually someone should have too much pride to want extra life? ?

No offense taken

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