I wish you success 👍

English is not my first language and I am not good at writing in English. I'm sorry if I wrote something that doesn't make sense or sounds wrong.

Not bad. For the first ten chapters, it was enjoyable to read. Superman is too powerful for this world, it will be difficult to put up a real fight without adding more to the world of bnha.Superman is too powerful for this world, it will be difficult to put up a real fight without adding more to the world of bnha. Of course, the essence of the story can be based on the way it solves things and human relationships. Anyway, I've never liked the character of bakugou. I hope you have a good plan for it. I also suggest using the character melissa shild if you're thinking of romance. He is a character who has been pushed into the background despite his potential in many fanfics. I've read a fanfic with a similar premise (I don't remember the name of the novel). Anyway, the novel I read earlier quickly turned into a multiverse-level absurdity and ended up with a lot of logical errors and gaps in the story. I hope this novel doesn't turn into a huge flop. I wish you success...

It was a beautiful trip. Thanks for that. I wish you success in your future novels.

I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to read more. It's just that the character got stronger very quickly. I hope it doesn't cause you to get stuck while writing.

I think anyone who deserves it can be bullied.

Oh! It looks like he's going to be an "Op" character very fast.

I understand. I just wanted to read a fan-fic about "rick and morty". It was too much for me to have Smut so prominent. Anyway, I wish you continued success in writing. 👋

This is a rewrite.

Dude, I understand you want to write what you want🫡. But I'm here for the plot of this novel. I don't have a problem with your smut writing, but can you write a plot a bit.

Btvs, Pokemon, Farmville, Kenichi, Monopoly, Harypotter, Atg, Stargate, A Song of Ice and Fire, Cooking show, Dinosaur Gauntlet, World of Warcraft, Generic Naruto Fanfiction, Desolate Era, the Three Realms. (Worlds he traveled) It's a bit boring and incomplete.

It sounds a bit confusing, but it starts to be understood as you read. Not bad for killing time. I read up to "C44". When reading this novel, don't think too much about the character's future and past. Just focus on the event that lasts for the duration of the chapter you're reading. The book tries to be a bit mysterious, which confuses a lot of readers. As far as I can tell, (mc of uncertain origin) is shaping the marvel universe according to his own wishes with his overpowered. I think he makes this novel a little bit of mystery, a lot of slice of life, a little bit of romance with owepowered mc. Anyway it's been a bit of a complicated review, but I'm enjoying reading it. I felt the need to do this review because the author corrected chapter 38.

Owerlord, That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime. It can be one of these two worlds or a mix of both. The world of "game of thrones" can also be nice to write about. Or "goblin slayer" . There are goblins in Clash of clans, which can be a bit complicated.

I'm going to give it a four-star review because 10 chapters isn't enough for me to give a healthy review. For 10 episodes, I'd say it's pretty average compared to a lot of fan fiction. But the potential of the story is very strong. The Omnitrix is a really powerful tool for the Marvel Universe when used correctly. Anyway, so far so good. Later in the novel, we'll find out if this is a masterpiece or a disappointment.

I understand, I will take another look at it in the future and write a review again.