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Krishna_Manohar

Krishna_Manohar

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2021-11-21 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohara year ago
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    a better title for this novel would be "useless wish: plot armor paragon of extreme cliches". The MC in this novel is super dumb, retarded and almost a brain dead idiot, yet he keeps killing or escaping all the time from powerful people that can kill him with a flick of their finger and the only reason for this is the extremely dense and illogical plot armor ( PLOT ARMOUR is strong with this one - STAR WARS). The story progression gets worse by the chapter. The villains are quite cliché. a super powerful villain doesn't kill the extremely weak, near dead MC just because he killed one of his minions Infront of his eyes before he got to that state and the villains reasoning for that is that a weak person like MC will never be a threat to him. He also asks his other minions not to kill the unconscious, near death MC as he killed their fellow minion and hence dangerous ................ stupidity at its peaks.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Xiao_Zan

    Then why the low rating

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Antwortet auf DelzGB

    And "abandoning his life and family" is not mental fortitude. its called escaping. Afterall you said in the beginning that this idiot MC even blamed his mother once for giving birth to him. it wouldn't be difficult for people like that to abandon their families.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Antwortet auf DelzGB

    It doesn't make sense to you because you seem to be actively trying not to understand what other people are saying and you seem to be even worse at accepting criticism. This MC should have lived a life of physical pain and inability all his life according to your description in the beginning. That usually develops atleast some tolerance towards towards pain and desperation in people (unless the said person is a irredeemable useless trash who would never amount to anything in life). But this MC was triggered very easily just by some pain and hunger. MC is being naïve is acceptable as he lived indoor all his previous life but what I said above will definitely disappoint a lot of people. you don't need to make the MC totally useless to build his character. you can try doing that on the existing base.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
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    It was good till chapter 20 but then it turned into utter garbage. 1 dimensional brainless characters (all most everyone), no proper story and total filler content, idiot mc.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    world building is good but this has too much nonsense. and these idiots are acting as if they are on a chill instead of an apocalyptic game.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Antwortet auf DelzGB

    Will the game come into reality or does the powers in game somehow reflect in reality or is it just a famous game. I would like to know that before i dive in

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    I don't even need to read the next chapter to know that he will get a trash talent. and then he will awaken a "pies dropping from the sky - no need to work hard like all others" system. that's how it usually goes in garbage quality novels from a country that intends to raise its citizens like meek sheep to serve the needs of its elite minority.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    This story has all the makings of a future Supreme TRASH novel.

  • Krishna_Manohar
    Krishna_Manohar3 years ago
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