Potato_killer
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Why is eddie in outlast, isnt he from the whistleblower. Isnt like the main chaser in outlast chris?
The plant above ground can get fairly big
The only time the it was a female pronoun used was when the preist was introdused and it said preistess the rest of the times this caracter has been mentioned it was with male pronounces.(sorry for bad english)
Wouldnt she be his niece and not his cousin?
Original female? Maybe…
I thought that the power system was fairly interesting, his «relationship» with that girl felt like a little rushed but you wrote it in a way that made it feel less rushed (if that makes sense). I dont quite remember how the system worked but he received blueprints like way to easily. Anyways, if you feel like rewriting then you do that. I for one believe that you potentially have a good story here. Ps. Apologies if this was hard to understand. English is my third language.(and im writing on my phone)
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He could say that he was observing how their language worked, to learn it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯