AND this novel is going to be a short one

shamelessly authorsan here... This is my first work so am open to opinions and ideas i hope u stick around with me first 5 chapters might be too short, i want to see reviews to know am going in the right direction [img=recommend]

A Great read and story but damn mc lacks charisma ...like why the hell do u level up if u can't work things out urself ...he simply has a simp mentally