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RE295

RE295

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2021-11-17 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • RE295
    RE2953 months ago
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    It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author

  • RE295
    RE2955 months ago
    Verschickt

    the execution is just poor & everything feels flat. worst is probably the beginning being a near carbon copy of MHA: Undying but 1000x times worse