MG_3302

Most of us are 'human zombies' driven only by the will to survive, by the lust for success, money, and fame. Reality. I feel sorry for both of the main characters. They both got lost somewhere along the way, but that's very human. There's little difference between the two. I have a very mixed impression of these two FL friends. They seem to want to help her, but are they really helping her, to find her feelings again? Pushing her, despite the values she holds, into the arms of the mysterious man. This is a very typically masculine approach. It won't solve her worries. On the contrary. What if, on top of that, she loses her self-respect? I'm waiting for the continuation. So many questions to be answered. What’s happened with her ex? Will the FL surprise the one who was the reason for this spark in her eyes?

It's a very promising story. I just finished ten chapters... The author knows English, I don't see any grammar or stylistic errors. The ML is expressive, and the plot interesting. Well done! <3

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Realy? Why I don't belive Patrick :)

Who is Sam?

What is Kelly doing there?

Is he jealous? [img=faceslap]

Nick is sly too.