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LeFraud_James231mthAntwortet auf Silent_CodeThat guy who sells coffee in Bastion? goat? He's just a nobody. No one knows his past.
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Unfortunately I couldn't make an evaluation before the restricted chapters. MC gets you know what and then... too many "fillers". Therefore the story development and world background lacks a bit of development (even though it's only the begining). I would suggest putting the paywall after the conclusion of the rift arc.
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Not a little sister, please. Way overused
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He's right. He has to survive the first nightmare
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damnation
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language, kid
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Oh, thanks for the time skip. I really didn't wanna to see endless chapters with a brat doing things way over his age.
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Still better than Sunless. Be happy, Northern
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No truck-kun, no Isekai. You must follow the rules
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Just wait till my boy evolve to Talonflame and go full brave bird sweeping the floor
[Does this woman have no shame? Looking down on the Windspeed Hawk. Fully grown, I am sure that I can make it to the Commander Rank, and she's just an Ascendant warrior. Give it a month, and I'll bet I could beat her up.] - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert
Best room. Don't at me
'So, the last resident planted a fruit to help her cheat on exams, one to sabotage other students in the woods, and catnip to bribe the security so she could sneak out at night. This senior was definitely an interesting person.' Karl decided. - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert
Good thing they don't have Transcendents. Too much power
White for Common Grade, Black for Awakened, and Bronze for Ascended, according to the text on the badges. The badges on the new students' uniforms were all white, so Karl hadn't noticed until now that they represented anything but the Academy. - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert
So the author skipped the development of the romance just like this? Wow. Why write all those things before? I mean, billions of words/chapters for like random figths, for example, and 3 sentences for Alice and Michael? I mean, I'm out.
They shared their first kisses and had a happy time together – even if it was not much. - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert"This is a two-seam fastball. Not only can it be thrown at a similar speed, the seams and rotation causes the ball to move erratically through the air. If you use these two grips effectively, you won't need to learn a breaking ball before your body has fully developed."
- LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert"T-T-Tanaka!????" Ken's whole body felt as if it had lost strength as he stared at the Ace pitcher for the Japanese National Team. What the hell was Yu Tanaka doing in his image training facility?
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It's too fast and unreal, but who cares. We had regression and systems too. I'm still in because it's baseball
Chris sat down and took out his briefcase, calmly collecting the forms from inside and placing them in front of his wife. In the next moment his face turned up into a big smile as he announced. - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert
It's still a great deal. Daichi will be a multi millionaire lol
"So how about you make it worth my while and I'll sign these papers for you." A small smile played on the corner of her lips, as if she had just played a finishing move in a chess game. - LeFraud_James231mthKommentiert
Not the same plot... ugh.
"But… If we were to adopt you into our family, then she would have no more say as to what happened to you." Chris continued, his tone warm and gentle.