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Story is great but dialogue and narration is somewhat poor.. every other line starts with sentences like 'with deep responsibility' or else..it seems redundant

biggest bullshit story...MC got into 11 yrs Tony and gets into wizard school...it was 1984...since then everything is like canon... nothing changed...stane kills his parents via Hydra but he doesn't give a shit and gets himself kidnapped like canon... dude he went from 21st century into 1980s..he is genius inventory, a wizard and student of ancient one also so why didn't he try to make his company no 1 in the world..he could've excelled in every industry...he could've taken control of red room...or maybe get into space and visit another planets..but no idiot MC and author just copy pasting canon

Evening else is great except unnecessary women drama...every 2nd chapter MC is fucking any actress...

The concept is good..story wise is also good but there is a problem with the MC character...it's like he is trying to get into every girl' s pants he met... Nowadays stories on web novels are more into the harem genre...more than 40 percent of story content is related to romance...and plot is discarded

this is a direct copy paste of fanfiction REVOLUTION

wtf is wrong with these people...i mean 6 years old MC behaving like pedo...he is just sparring with a bunny but also thinking about the soft feel of her legs..are all Chinese authors are horney pedo?...every female character is written just for sex purposes and nothing else..

Is there any novel where we can at least read the story without any mention of sex every chapter...i mean MC is only 2 years old and is thinking about fucking his own mother..grow up dudeWhat is even the meaning of rebirth if he can't focus on his priorities...at least become an adult then pursue these things and stop thinking on fkng 8 yrs old girls

Best novel I've read so far which combines one piece and Naruto...

MC was well going on becoming an edge lord but in ch 25 he saw a girl and started speaking cringe lines

If you can ignore the Chinese system of writing then the novel is very good to read...but wtf man why these authors are not changing their writing style...I mean slender finger, jade like beauty , courting death, sword eyebrows, luscious lips...these words you will find every alternate chapter for either the MC or his harem cast... can't these authors stop exaggerating characters