Flameingo

Well if it works I don't see why they couldn't hide forever. Even if it didn't work for long any time gained is more time they have to train.

Thought the MC was gonna be all "I'm too good for house rivalry". Why does he all of a sudden care about what stuck up Slytherins think? The whole reason he went Slytherin was because he said it didn't matter what house he goes in but now his actions are being restricted by his house.

That's not how the ROR works. He would only end up in the Room of Lost Things if that's what he asked.

Pretty good, worth a look if you are into more kill heavy MC's. I feel like he leans a bit to much into cringy/edgelord territory in some places although it never goes too far over the line as to be unreadable. I'm not against killing either but I feel this fic goes a bit into more unhinged territory instead of pragmatic as he basically just kills any goons he runs into. Feels like someone as smart as MC would keep their kills more targeted to me anyway.

Teenage = 13-19 because they end in "teen".

This story suffers very strongly from the "smart characters can only be as smart as their authors/plot" dilemma. A 'genius' MC that doesn't take the basest of safety precautions before or during comic book experiments? Constantly makes rash decisions, thinks "I better start taking things more seriously", then continues to make rash decisions as if the previous thinking never happened. He's a genius who doesn't think, most of the plot points feeling like they are only happening because the author forced them to and not because they actually make any sort of sense. In the end it became too frustrating to continue.