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the lore and the background of the story is great well thought of my only critic is his personality/character or lack of character like his been tried for a couple of years and has died multiple times yet no change in personality or trauma and he is the chapter master give him a bit of aura and boldness and certainty to his mission for the EMPEROR OF MAN that's all

so i've been reading this fanpic for a while now and i feel it 's time for me to drop a review it's basically the greatest fanfic that i've read of GOT it has a great story great characters the sired characters are also great it's all i've been wanting good job author please continue the good work

love the story you love the translation great job i actually said the original and i'd say you're translation it's way better

i am fairly much satisfied with the current story and it's also highly educated because of the use of scientific mathematicals and other educational terms overall it has a good plot and characters

so i have just read a few chapters of this fanfiction and i can see you're doing pretty well i will change my rating once i have fully read the other chapters or when i find it more satisfactory overall could read

welcome back author san

please don't drop i really like the story it's great

the best lotm & tog fanfic ever and I loved the writing style the transition of perspective between the m c and the other characters i am just worried about the facing of his advancement in his sequence like it's not even half of the story of tower of god and he's already nearing mid sequence and will your writing source only be the anime or will you take from the manhwa or other sources

a great read overall i just have a few concerns please don't make jin mori one shot everyone

good start to a great story just explain why he has toki or battle spirit when he has the laplas factor