HeavenlyAzureLotus
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Well, I really enjoyed the series, it would be nice if you could do a 2-3 chapter side story with all the cast and the happy life after. Sad the novel ended so eruptly, but I understand you weren’t enjoying writing it anymore. I hope to see another great novel from you in the future.
Reverse trap incoming!
Nana is really talented at creating both a spicy adult novel aswell as an engaging and entertaining story. If you’re looking for a some mature harem fantasy you’ve found the goldmine. Content with an engaging story ☑️ Enjoyable characters and interactions ☑️ Well written and spicy adult scenes ☑️ Diverse cast of women ☑️ Emotional and individual characteristics ☑️ Well written MC and Cast ☑️ Warning; you might just have trouble putting down the story.
Very good. Hate Su Lin anyway. Time to cuck him and take his leadership position
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Just want to leave this comment here since being an author is always an evolving process and I just wanted to let you know how I felt as a reader (I have stopped reading at end of volume 6) so when I first started reading I was really excited, honestly by the end of volume 5 I was so excited for what was going to happen, sae saw alot, how was he going to manage that? Where will things go will Natasha after the fight? The shuri arc is next too awesome Im excited to see where it ties to the prologue and how the interactions between the female MCs will be, Mc is growing in powers and will get more involved with Yui that’s dope! At the end of volume 5 I was sure I would love this novel, volume 6 however was far from what I expected, sae and Natasha disappear? not mentioned for 120 chapters? Shuri was like 5 of the total chapters? Why was volume 6 so long it felt incoherent and like there was no direction in the story, it felt like all the setup from volume 1-5 was completely abandoned. A random girl who death was used as a plot device got more charcter Development than the entire rest of the female cast. It was honestly unreal to me, as volume 6 dragged on I enjoyed it less and less, it felt like you don’t even really have an idea of the story is going to go ane you’re winging it lol. I’m honestly really dissapointed volume 1-5 we’re so good than we get a volume bigger than the whole rest of the book and it’s a total pivot from the first 5 volumes that made me engaged with the story.
She is sweet and unfortunate, at this point if she isn’t kept around in the story I would really question why she has had more engagement and charcter depth than most the female MCs.
Long time HG reader, been reading his stories since hero king was around 105 chapters. I’ve had the opportunity to watch him evolve as a writer anyway heres my honest review. What I like: unique setting of paranormal meets normal society. Heavily researched religious & mythological ideas and influences in the story. Unique & Interesting power system. Things are very well described leaving a very complete feeling to each action taken. MC Is not a hero or villain just someone trying to do the best for people he cares about, which is very human. What I dislike: plot feels very slow with many description and large pools of information heavily impeding plot development. The prologue, first 30 chapters, foreshadowing and MCs job give you a feeling that there will be smut and harem relationship advancement when in reality there has been barely any in 300 chapters. (As a SHK reader this dIssapointed me quite a lot). I would understand if he choose to make this story less smutty and much less relationship focused but the way the first 30-60 chapters lead you to be excited about the relationship advancement & female MCs only for plot to be slow and relationship advancement almost non existent you feel kind of baited by the introduction and early chapters leaving dissatifaction with the plot progression. (Example author states vol 6 is supposed to be the arc of Female Mc X (no spoilers) yet 60 chapters in we haven’t even seen her) essentially getting your hopes up for relationship advancement only for it to be ignored most of the volume. Overall: this novel is still better than 95% of WNs don’t be mistaken. Just don’t go into this story excited hoping for fast plot, smut and relationship advancement, or you will be like me and be dIssapointed everytime you read more chapters and nothing happens that you’re expecting. //Lotus