Grumpy_Monka

Ur right I did I’ll have to fix that

My bad I’ll fix it in the following chapters

Dog shit. End of story. 1111111111111111

The moment you went to wuxia world the story became trash. You could have written a new novel with a different name and it didn’t have to be a fan fic because all cultivation novels are all the same. What was the point of the fanfic?

DMC was one of the best devil may cry games . people give it a lot of shit but in reality it was great

I have one issue with this kleopatra. Cleopatra was ptolemen ie Roman in origin. Infact she was inbred and carried no Egyptian pedigree what so ever. Nefertiti would have been a better choice here but then again this is fiction so whatever I guess

bro you literally just said her name was Miranda 🤣

star forge PCs??? is this an OTK ad??

At this point Van should have been like: “ Finn, I impregnated 2 goddess and your telling me I’m incompatible with a pallum? I can give you a live demo next time there is a chance to do so. Heck I might be more compatible than you Finn!”

This novel is trash don’t bother. The author is using it to chill their pat reon page.