Psp?! Are u an idiot? Ok, u made the platform (hell know how), but what will u do with software??? Can u just make cards, chess, gwint or s.l.t.

Whad ze faq wis dialoks man?! Zeya aoful. Like .... idek... just aoful

Such little chapters, so many "😉", such little information and slow advancement. I read 10 chapters in less than 5 minutes. Boring, drop.

Too long for f45king canon. Drop.

With all this flashbacks I just skipped 3 chapters, cause titles said everything I need to know. TOO MANY FLASHBACKS!

What an idiocity... he changed the memories of soldiers and what about daimyos who ordered the attack? Logistics staff? All villagers who will met them?

Что за бред?! Дроп, просто дроп.

Now the whole world will know that Mc is the master of fuin.... and all of these because of morality and stupidity of tsunade: 1. Didn't let Mc to learn about byakugan; 2. Let the kenshi leave. One life don't worth the whole village/world, because now every villages will attach konoha if they are not idiots. In that regard Danzo was right.

rag. balabol. I'm talking about the boy. If you decide to act tough, act tough. and he backed down without receiving a specific answer. It seems the Western world is biologically incapable of keeping its word.

Согласен, там блядь целая поэма, сколько же его люди ждали пока он все это писал.

Чушь. Для чего вообще был этот разговор??? Он мог бы хоть шантажом узнать имя отца. а так, сдулся как тряпка, как хирузен.

"Good deeds"... are u serious??? Ok, then Danzo is bad for konoha... Killing danzo is good...the sooner the better... Killing danzo impossible now...need a way to kill him now... Easy answer - kill Sasuke...itachi will revenge to Danzo...good for konoha...sasuke's death - acceptable price...IS NOT THAT A GOOD DEED? there is neither good nor evil, that good for one is evil for another

Скукота. Автор тупо канонодрочер. Пытается сделать серого гг, но слишком любит коноху, чтобы у него это получилось. Откровенно жалкая попытка сыграть в умного ГГ, при том что автор походу школьник, не имеющий достаточного жизненного опыта для этого, отчего все диалоги звучат как у детей, а образ мышления ГГ как у эмоциональной девочки - подростка.

absolutely disgusting. does the author consider it a normal reaction when a boy agrees with a stranger’s request to call him grandfather? so he only showed that he is more cunning than his age. any normal child would say that he does not know him and would not call a stranger grandfather. so, he only showed his cowardice.

Wow wow wow change the canon for your perspective to look better.... wow 👌 👍

Not bad. At least there is some logic

what nonsense?! He says that he prevented assassination attempts, which means Naruto was already hunted, because he is an Uzumaki and a Jinchuriki. so what was the point of hiding information about his father? and yes, think about this: he has mustache marks on his face!, his last name is Uzumaki!!, he is blonde (but definitely not Yamanaka)!!!, the whole village calls him a demon!!!! born in the year of Minato's death!!!!!, orphan!!!!!!, Orochimaru knew that Minato and Kushina were a couple, like all senior shinobi of Konoha. Now tell me how stupid you have to be not to understand who he is???? oooh he had a moral injury.... such a poor boy of 40 years old

Наивная история с заявкой на драму от подростка, живущего в тепличных условиях, не имеющего жизненного опыта и зомбированного западной пропагандой (мышления скота)._______________________________<_<_____________________________

What the purpose of all this battle??? Stupid fight for fight??? If he don't kill her in this battle the whole fight would be meaningless.

Why sovereignty??? Why not sovereign??? Is English your native language?