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ok definitely harem route...and i like it.

There is no need to display skills every time you show the system status, author. Most of the information was already covered by the two status windows you showed.

Based on your writing, I am guessing you are a high school student aspiring to be an author?

I don't have much hope for character development after reading the first two chapters, which had numerous plot holes. Even talented writers struggle to achieve substantial character growth, so this author is unlikely to succeed. It might be better to have the character undergo a personality change after death.

There are so many plot holes, it seems completely contrived.

bro why not start using grammarly and ai for better writing.

you are forgetting that there are less then 1000 people on 2 star in the city and mc is already comparable to those 2 star knights. So don't consider his age for the money he has earned. That is also the reason why he is wearing a cape.

i guess you have read alot of chinese novels my guy...only those ones are like that mostly.

can't he just hide his identity and cover up his face...and use magic however he likes.

because he needs 10 and he doesn't have enough money. He bought a dagger instead because it will help with the returns.