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I’m glad you enjoyed the story!

Thank you for the advice! I will try to apply it to my next book ;)

The writing is very descriptive it gives a creepy feeling, which is very fitting for this book! I like how the first chapter is very long because it gives a nice introduction to the story.

The story is nice, at the beginning the punctuation was kind of not that great as well as the grammar. What is nice is that the auth looks at the points he needs to work on and gradually improves. the author listens to the readers advice which is always nice. Keep working hard!

Great work!

Your welcome rather I should be thanking you for making such an awesome book!

Audrey! Please don’t cry! Author! Come here and let me give you a good beating! How dare you make her cry!?

This is a good book, the mc is really pitiful I really want to give her a hug! The ml is good and their interaction on the last chapter that’s not locked really breaks my heart. This book makes you feel emotional! The author is really good at making you go on a rollercoster of rides!

The plot was interesting and I love the characters. The mcs son is so sweet from what I can tell. He’s my favorite character so far! The read was great! Your doing great, keep going!

Your welcome