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Sdfd_Fgcv

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2021-09-23 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv2 years ago
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    Till chapter 70 Man story is just without any soul and author mc is annoying in start story seems promising with good potential then it all start turning shit when author mc start playing drama maN not gonna read it just time waste.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv2 years ago
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    For you author man what type of shit is this man novels mc is last rank in his class transmigrated mc is even more type of shit he is annoying and supporting characterd are literaly worst i have seen ever this novel is just full of shit for even 1 chapter you will not like this novel and hope for it to get better and you find it getting more worse.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv2 years ago
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    Everything was fine then mc chooses gun then shit not gonna read it I thought he was a swordsman like AUTHOR'S POV but just a cheap copy of novels extra shit author why choose gun over sword.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv2 years ago
    Antwortet auf ascension

    No I am 10 year old. Close but no cigar.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv2 years ago
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    Man man man great novel so far and it's best novel out there this novel is in just next level unique plot no I suppose mythical rank would be perfect.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv3 years ago
    Antwortet auf CrimsonWolfAuthor

    Thanks dear author for your work.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv3 years ago
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    Too Good and with sword wielder author I like it second after vill@in retirement. God good good. Please increase frequently realese and mass release

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv3 years ago
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    Bro author your novel is real masterpiece I like unpredictable events really this is the best novel i have ever read. This novel is made me happy and it creates a universe in readers mind. Too good to read.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv3 years ago
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    Dear author your novel was really good till aroung chaptar 315 and story was flawless with best story progression but sadly now you explain too much, story is too slow and in every chapter you write that its 20 km wide that 15 km large etc. Its quite annoying we understood that there world is as big as sun but you repeatedly telling us in every chapter and there are too much explanation what protogonist thinks and tool less dialog between character literally last around 100 chapters he only talks with his subordinate there is not even second mc, if you will with this slow pace your chapter exceed 3000 . And nearly every reader get bored and your story is very very predictable, you never does something in your novel which we cant predict. Please dont make this story worst please. Speed up dude.

  • Sdfd_Fgcv
    Sdfd_Fgcv3 years ago
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    Author please continue this novel i like your novel very much when i first found this novel at night i read it till morning comes as you can guess I love your work please continue, everyday I wake up and check on your novel update but it rarely come please continue dear author. I can guess your novel will became really top ranking if you continue your work please please please.