DreamCreator

That was really short for a story but quite interesting

Interesting, but you had a plot hole. You mentioned that what she steal is forgotten, without any impact, but now you said that "Dumbledore might notice something", which is supposed to be impossible

Really something I dislike in novels

The system you created is garbage, only here to ruin the story

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Interesting!!! Need more of this story. Hope you don't drop it, author, it seems to appeal to multiple readers. Keep going! Let's goooooo

Thanks for the chapter, quite original!

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