Martyrous

The story is great, but the translation of certain words and phrases leaves me wondering how the translator is so lazy that they can't proofread it after it goes through the translation software...

The PAPR system will help maintain a steady flow of air in light or moderately contaminated areas, while the Armored O2 tank backpack can be equipped and used for areas that have heavy contamination I know that power armor solves most of these issues but having something to use for if power armor isn't available for whatever reason or is to cramped for it to fit is still a good idea.

I do have a suggestion for the armor. Actually, I'd suggest adding an undersuit to wear under the armor that provides protection against NBC threats and also replacing the air gas filters on the helmet with a PAPR (Powered Air Purifying Respirator) system with the helmet attached to the PAPR system with Air/gas NBC filters to it via a hose and then mounted to the battle belt like most IRL PAPR systems. additionally, I'd suggest creating an armored O2 tank backpack that you can attach to the masks hose for use in heavily NBC contaminated areas as an air/gas NBC filter isn't really designed to be used in these zones for extended operations. Most filters are designed to be used in light or moderately contaminated areas and must be replaced every 2 hours in the case of nuclear contamination less than that if you exert yourself. Apologies for the info dump, but fallout tends to gloss over radiation protection and gas mask filter life with their game mechanics. I'd also add a portable decontamination shower to the hauler, as in IRL, you can't just take your PPE off after you leave a contaminated area. You also need to wash your gear off, or you risk contamination when you remove it.

The story is good so far, but the grammar and spelling aren't the best quality. Hopefully, that will get better eventually, or you'll come back and do a re-write/proofread to fix these issues once you've got more chapters published.

the eyes of hawk are likely similar or the same as the eagle vision from the Assains Creed games if I had to guess.

would be great for trade or if combined with some kind of auto fabrication perk down the line.

vault my bad

that is OP and could likely save you from a lot of traps like getting locked and/or sealed in a vaul or bunker or getting buried in rubble.

gatling plasma accelerator?

wonder if that includes power armor. Most people forget that most types of power armor are classified as humanoid vehicles that the wearer pilot's and not the same as a set of combat armor by any means.