Monmonq

oh... sorry, it seems, I wasn't paying attention enough while reading. thanks

This guy needs to be executed, asap

yeah, right

Isn't it common knowledge that Hisoka partake on the hunter exam before 287th? If I remember, he beat the examiner and got disqualified because of it.

Grooming arc begins!

Why does he keep calling him young man?

I'm loving the story so far but, it seems dialogue—specifically warhammer40k writing—is not the author strongest suit

Why does all Hunter X Hunter chinese fanfic need the MC to Join the phantom group? Are they really that cool, cause I don't

One space marine is enough for the zombie apocalypse

I know my words are harsh, but I didn't drop the novel—not for now at least. I think the overall critic that I'll give this book is how fast-paced it is. I know the world you're writing would be big and that's the reason why the writing style is. And I think that's the reason I'm not captivated for now due to the shallow portrayal of the characters: "If I can't root for the protagonist's success, it's a waste of time for me to continue" I think these words express what my thoughts on the story—for now. Yeah... I hope before he expands outside of his territory(Ternell City) you can flesh him more and hopefully a pretty compelling one—not the best, but I hope for improvement. But for now, I'll wait and see. I'm already near the latest chapters and I think it wouldn't be enough for me. Have a good day!