Rational_madness

I disagree, 300 chapters and it hasn't gone anywhere. I suggest not wasting time on this

Which one? Dxd? I never said dxd isn't cringe, its utter garbage in fact, otherwise I wouldn't be looking for fanfics

No, you just have trash taste. Go watch things like cowboy bebop, 91 days

This is much better than the previous chapter before you rewrote it, the interactions seem more accurate to sirzechs' personality as it was portrayed. Tho do hope you give him a happy ending sometime, feelsbadman

If it was any other Shinobi brainwashed with the will of fire they would hand it over immediately if he asked

That's because konoha kills them before they can defect lol

Yes, zeref is a pathetic wimp if you ask me. He could have tried inventing or learning god slaying magic, killing the god and possibly dispelling the curse, but all he did was cry and whine like a b***h

Wtf is big carousel? Wtf is thousand points refreshed every 2 years? This translation is bad

My reply was meant for Daoist4MxvaV, in the order of the statements he made. Not sure why it isn't highlighted, but I am agreeing with you