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There is another Error when mentioning the clan. its good if corrected imediately

When I read the first chapter I thought of droping it, But know it is really interesting development

Good Story Development Good world selection Unique cultivation system:- i haven’t read the cultivation system mentioned in this novel in any of novel i ever read.

Bad Writing Quality Good story Garuu foyyachuu kan Dandahuu fakkataa.kanafuu Hordofuuf qophaheen jiraa. Osoo kutaan Danuun post tahee immoo bayee garii turee .