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Haru_Sakura1992311mthKommentiertdoes this mean that from the 6th to 36th portrait that rio was excluded?
Rio, of the numbered portraits from 6 to 36, was excluded. Among the majority, there are numbers 1 to 24; not a number are on the two siblings.- Haru_Sakura1992311mthKommentiert
oh my god, proper use of a metaphor
Though the woman could smile brighter than any light, she could not be his lighthouse. - Haru_Sakura1992311mthAntwortet auf Better_Name
just wait for the character creator update
New Game? - Haru_Sakura1992311mthAntwortet auf Arcguile_Renzig
Most definitely no! How could they be from there!
Pyro Abyss Mage of the Abyss. - Haru_Sakura1992311mthAntwortet auf FrogGodKing
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bro shion learned to cook whatchu expect
Here's the secret to the fluffiest pancakes: Mix dry and wet ingredients separately at first then combine just before cooking. You can mix the dry ingredients as much as you want and do the same for the wet ingredients, but when the two mixtures come together, use a light touch. Over-mixing the batter is a common mistake — it makes them heavy and flat, not fluffy.detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrAntwortet auf DarkDevKing28
nah nah nah, this is webnovel we gotta do it their style, heaven defying spider sense
Rimuru: "I'm not sure why, I feel like Kyojuro did something very stupid and miss Onodera is a part of the reason it happened."detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrAntwortet auf Darth_Nihilus_6756
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Kyojuro: "That must be it! That bastard was isekai'd!"detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrAntwortet auf VahnGreyrat
chances are you met someone with some sort of allergy, even if obscure. but if thats the case they probably just didnt tell you
Rimuru: "It's ok, I will go cook you something to eat. Is there anything that you cannot eat or are allergic to?"detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrKommentiert
nut-kun dun like yew
Helped a missing child, took pictures with some kids then castrated and crippled a child molester in an alley. By the time he was finished, it was already 1 PM, so he went and purchased some food and drinks from a nearby (Soobway) restaurant.detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrKommentiert
explaining without talking to the audience. amazing
Momo: "It was his first time releasing so much bloodlust that he was nearly consumed by it and went berserk. However, he somehow manages to calm himself down. Was my answer the correct one father?"detailIn MHA as Rimuru Tempest with Archer Emiya's Power(Being Rewritten)Anime und Comics · Daoist764038 - Haru_Sakura199231yrAntwortet auf Dao_of_BalanceBeing a bady again feels weird and uncomfortable. I have no control of my body what so ever.
- Haru_Sakura199232yrVerschickt
I feel this is a very good book and would definitely look for more like it. If you were to make a v2 of this with either your own universe or if you get lucky, try to get permission from marvel and dc to make and PUBLISH this as a book, because I have a feeling that maybe not top 1 but definitely would sell once it got recognition.
- Haru_Sakura199232yrVerschickt
overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)