Daragon_Fiyar

Eh? My friend doesn't know if you know this or not, but most fanfic stories nowadays are like that, they only consist of 500 to 700 words per chapter, maybe the writers are just following those novels? I don't know...

Writing quality is good, written quite well, can be said to be an interesting story. Updating stability is still uncertain, but it seems like it will update steadily. Story development follows a fairly cliché plot about a chat group and such, but with an apocalypse concept. Character design is good and creative. The world background is considered common but not too definite, further research is still needed.

Good story quality, Interesting story development to continue following, character design is quite classic, but good! world background like the previous novel, but worth following, overall average can be described as a very good and interesting novel!

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Good!

The story's intonation is much better, the plot is not too rushed, the dialogue is quite good, but the punctuation is very, very poor. This is how it should be if you use a question mark. Do not add a period. That is very wrong. "!." is very foolish and incorrect. Just use "!" or "." separately. For example, "Hey Luffy! How are you!" Okay, just use the exclamation mark. Do not add it with a period. Also, do not add the combination of "!?" too frequently and continuously. It is very inefficient and uncomfortable. Just use "!" or "?" alone.

There are several writing errors, inappropriate punctuation, somewhat strange descriptions, a rushed storyline, lack of good story intonation, it can be said to be very lacking. Can it be read? Yes, that's all. Thank you.

There are several writing errors, inappropriate punctuation, somewhat strange descriptions, a rushed storyline, lack of good story intonation, it can be said to be very lacking. Can it be read? Yes, that's all. Thank you.

What? Turns out of us one religion, are you also Muslims? Don't you even Indonesian?