Adam007

Hi! Then, this story is a real banger! Literally pure perfection... or well, at least I try to be! Haha, just kidding. The truth is, there's probably a lot of mistakes out there... But hey, they always say you learn fast when you're wrong, right? So... I guess I'll get better little by little! I hope you'll give it a chance, I promise it won't be a total disaster... or so I hope, at least. Denki Kaminari, our prota, is a cheerful, joking and somewhat carefree character(oh and quite perv heh) but at the same time aware of his faults. I wanted to reflect that optimistic and a bit insecure tone that characterizes him. I'm open to any cosntructive criticism you might have for me.

Oh I didn't hear of it, I'm going to look it up and see if it's good. There are few Shazam or Atlantean fanfics (which is why I was so interested in doing this)

No Harem

Harem!

First of all, keep in mind that this is the Shazam from Young Justice, not the Shazam from the movies. Therefore they don't have the same powers. Young Justice's Shazam can't use lightning. Second and I repeat again, I don't like to nerf the main character, the things that develop are because that's how it all works. Third, it's true that he doesn't need rest or sleep, but he's still human and if he continuously reads something or continuously does something he gets bored and tired like any other person. Not because he is really tired, but because he is simply annoyed to keep doing the same thing. I hope I have cleared your doubts.

Therefore a power like the Wisdom of Solomon can't interact with his mind either since it is protected at all times. I didn't nerf it because I wanted to, in fact at one point I thought about using the Wisdom of Solomon but it was a plot hole that I didn't want in the story since this Gamers Mind didn't work that way.

Right, but remember that in this story at the beginning Death explained how this Gamers Maind would work. No one can actually do anything in his mind, neither read it, communicate or anything else, his mind is completely protected all the time.

Yeah🫠… Sorry about that, I really tried to avoid it but with Gamer Maind it was very difficult to make it work and I already had too many things planned to modify everything. It's not that I wanted to nerf him but that's just how it works Gamer Maind🥲

Well, I really hope you guys can give me feedback on this idea and what you think about what I'm trying to build.[img=recommend][img=recommend]