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Only read the first chapter, but your way of writing, the choice of words is extraordinary ❤️❤️. I am extremely impressed, but I suggest you write a novel, not descriptive writing. Try to minimize your description. All in all, your description was amazing, and your writing deserves respect.The topic you decide is also something that is so real and yet so traumatizing. I love it as you describe the society. Change the title to something easy for passersby to understand. You know most people here just scan for new stuff. Keep working hard, and I wish for your success. 👍👍
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where's the next chapter?
Author half of the chapter was the old chapter. this isn't fair.[img=Your move][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Ahh. This lin Qin is hypnotized without even the hypnosis system. Author wasn't this chapter too short. I need more. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ahh, for how long I waited for another chapter. Thank you so much. Author congratulations on getting chosen. 😍😍😊😊
don't you think breast hypnosis is too long
Thx for chapter. I think Yan qi is getting more crazier then lu ran
I don't really review a lot of novels, but I highly recommend reading this😍😍. People who love R18 stuff and smut, they will surely like this. The story includes a male best friend(ML) cheating on his fiance with his female best friend(FL), so no cliche. The story is not slow. The author starts the story and body hypnosis straight from chapter 1. The FL is a pervert and has a huge crush on the ML. The ML doesn't love the FL right now but is getting obsessed with some parts of the FL body due to the hypnosis and soon will be fully obsessed with her.. I am sure you will love this, and you will want more after reading. ❤️❤️❤️😍😍