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Primas12hKommentiertyour whole story is made up of mistakes, first) when monster are killed maximum of the time they leave their magic stone and small number of them only leave their whole body parts even that is rare sum of baby only leave their weapons or clothes and you forgot one more thing nobody f**** monster from that done gone they don't want to die not maximum of them second) your first story which I have already read and this one still doesn't make sense it is good but you are doing lots and lots of mistakes and you are not even correcting them and your way of writing I mean your punctuations to sentences doesn't even make sense if you don't use your brain, what time mean is you have done lots and lots of mistakes that even the set sentence you are trying to say does not come out in a right way and at least he was not heartless in a first story of yours before rewriting it now he has become what you call heartless mother f***** , he was an idiot before but now he has become what you call maximum of us people of today's society a heartless mother f****** society realistic with no empathy
Wordlessly I handed over a healing potion I had previously fused to her. "Drink," I said with a sigh. "If you are going to carry my burden... Actually, if you are going to be plucking the monster stones for me, you are going to need to be able to move and my name is Jake Barris of the Hephaestus Familia." I said dully as I realized I actually didn't need her much at all when I had my fusion inventory.- Primas1dKommentiert
I think you have some kind of mental problem because if the thing you are thinking applies to both the side then l your is life
"How nice it would be to have a world where women understood that I could give love to all of them, something like in the sultanates of the Middle East… although things were also problematic there… haaa… maybe if things were like in those animes, the whole world would be happy" - Primas2dKommentiert
her not his
The two exclaimed before Izuku zoomed in at lightning speed and Katsumiu created a large explosion from both his feet and hands producing booming sound that caused large dust while the others shielded their eyes. - Primas2dKommentiert
your copying this concept of the story especially this part from another because I have read the similar one and I know the name to I am not a kissing you in just saying you copied that Idea it is good but I don't have been better if they world in it together you get have made something different but it's okay
The next day, Izuku and his friends head home with Melissa accompanying them. She will be staying with Allmight and was recommended therefore she will not take the exam. Furthermore, she skipped straight to 3rd year in the hero course and will be studying in the support hero department. - Primas2dKommentiert
was not were
In that time frame, Melissa had grown closer to everyone, especially Izuku, who always flustered every time Camie's question ran through her mind. They accepted her to the unofficial harem squad of Izuku who were ignorant even when they were clearly talking about him. - Primas3dKommentiert
her
"Stop it, you two!" The two began to quarrel, making AllMight give an apologetics expression while Itsuka enlarged his fist to give them a smack, surprising Mellissa. Izuku instinctually evades her while Katsumi follows suit and barely dodges. - Primas3dKommentiert
that's not a hero that's dense idiot if you don't you know what you are getting yourself into that's not an good thinking because it will get yourself killed, yes you did safe somebody but but at what cost , at the cost of your life to think before you act he was a villains have one difference in their life and everybody knows that
"Yes it is when they move without thinking and saving someone despite the consequences. You knew you would be scolded by the heroes and yet still acted." Allmight replied. - Primas5dKommentiert
because he saved her
Her parents were arrested from child neglect and abuse while Himiko was adopted by her aunt and uncle who gave her the help she needed. This caused her to develop a crush on Izuku because she saved her and gave a chance to have friends who accept her. - Primas5dKommentiert
please changes f****** name it's a represent to weakness I think it is shown in anime
"Except Deku, no one else is worth mentioning! But I'll be number one and not you Deku!" - Primas6dKommentiert
+1
2. Himawari wa Yoru ni Saku. - Primas6dAntwortet auf holt_kessho
you should do the Pokemon and the Pokemon should be oshawatt
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Primas8dKommentiertCh 10 Clones Are good but…
- Primas9dAntwortet auf Omega989
same
He paused, tapping his chin thoughtfully. "Electromagnetic field equations... Maxwell's equations will help model the field dynamics. But we also need to factor in the plasma behavior, the Hall effect, and the effects of turbulence." - Primas9dKommentiert
actually some of us have no problems but the maximum of the readers are the disgusting being you can think, and they are that if somebody has a problem then think before you writing because, what I am trying to say is you should just think before doing anything if you are offended by this then you don't have a right to do anything in your life because maximum of the readers in this web novel app are perverts
To all readers out there following this story Im not going to be writing lemons or limes until the third volume of this book when the main character is in the world of konosuba. Also I'm not trying to write basically pedophilia. The small scene with Ginny earlier is basically going to be as close as it is. If I offended or disgusted any reader I deeply apologize. This page will be up until 7-4-2024 - Primas9dAntwortet auf ImuSama
I am not even joking this fact is real maximum of the things I done by a male or boys , because they couldn't control their desires
Many private schools are designed specifically for girls rather than boys because society believes that boys are the root of all problems. As in many previous cases, the majority of immoral acts committed in schools are committed by boys who are unable to control their youthful desires. - Primas9dKommentiert
if you are getting less comments on your story don't get educated or emotional anything related to your mental health because sometimes okay sometimes stories are that good that other peoples only want to read the story until that chapters or the chapters end after that they will give their comments if that chapter is really good or not a stories really good or not so
Ch 28 Investigation - Primas10dKommentiert
I think in one it is revealed the source of his power, that energy which he is shooting from his eyes are from different dimension , his eyes are like some kind of dimensional portal, they are getting stronger day by day and when it reaches to that point, then beings from that universe will invade this world of ours, I am talking about Marvel universe as ours
Cyclops: Laser eyes - Primas12dKommentiert
+1
Or concubine harem: