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Teleporter

Teleporter

Lv11
2021-08-07 BeigetretenCanada
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  • Teleporter
    Teleporter8 months ago
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    Came back to try to keep I writing🫡 hope u guys like it, if not then oh well 😘 C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C

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  • Teleporter
    Teleporter10 months ago
    Kommentiert

    No harem at all, this is mostly about football. Why would you add a harem to the story it would just mess everyone up

  • Teleporter
    Teleporter10 months ago
    Kommentiert

    WHY WONT U UPDATE, BEEN WAITING 10 DAYS!!!!!😭😭😭 pllsss

  • Teleporter
    Teleporter10 months ago
    Kommentiert

    Just curious but how does Fujin look like?

  • Teleporter
    Teleporter10 months ago
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    I always come back to this story to see if u would ever update it or post another story. This was the fanfic that got me into reading a whole bunch of others even tho it’s only like 25 chapters, it was a great story. COME BACK TO US PHANTOMINIUM 😭😭😭

  • Teleporter
    Teleportera year ago
    Antwortet auf Boy_George

    Fuck nah, I’m telling you. Drop the supernatural and powers shit and keep the story with the Mc being sent back to 1912. And how he would deal with everything that would go on in that time. Ur concepts are great even ur other fanfic but the way u try to add in all this other nonsense just fucks everything up.

  • Teleporter
    Teleportera year ago
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    Tbh kinda surprised that the story is going well, he’s not op, doesn’t have a system, not chasing girls, and is actually trying to get stronger at a normal pace. Randomly found this and I kinda wanna see where this goes. I like it how he was dropped around the start of shippuden instead of years before naruto was even born because most fanfics that drop their Mc decades before the story starts never even get up to the start of canon before fuckin the whole plot up 8/10 for me 👍

  • Teleporter
    Teleportera year ago
    Antwortet auf Teleporter

    * you

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  • Teleporter
    Teleportera year ago
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    I’ve been trying to read it the past couple days but there’s like 7 chapters in revision. Why couldn’t I leave the old chapters and when you’re done, you switch it out for the new ones. I really like this fanfic concept but now I’m just getting frustrated looking everyday to see if u reuploaded the chapters 🥲

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  • Teleporter
    Teleportera year ago
    Kommentiert

    I’m wondering when the plot is going to proceed cuz I’m getting really bored ngl Not to hate tho I do like the fanfic but I feel like it’s been stagnant for a lot of chapters