mayathe4th

I really love this. if anything I am a little sad it is over but I really liked it. and I like that it isn't your standard superhero story . overall a really good read!

I like the overall idea and story, but I think it needs help from a really dedicated proofreader. the grammar mistakes spoil the story a lot. there are multiple mistakes in every chapter. I don't know if it gets better in the later chapters, I only read the first 30 or so.

girl got her priorities straight 🤣 ... bring the maid of honour over some silly secrets. that's a real friend...

this girl has her priorities right! <3

every girl needs a friend like this ... who unconditionally accepts if you don't want to talk but is there for you when you want to.

if my husband works out it would never be noticed by me unless it is very very obvious, because I see him every day... what a stupid comment

the spelling and grammar mistakes are too much for me. it makes it hard to understand and I got stuck often. many scenes were to hasty, others were drawn out endlessly (and needlessly). a good editor would really help the book. I don't know about the ending, I didn't reach it.

I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...