TalesCreative

This is a good story, it is well-paced with mysteries that leave the reader asking. However, the character design and world background need a little more work. The story development became better the more you read so it looks good so far. Keep on writing

As someone who really like Mythology, and Fate Franchise, I really like how this story is planning out. However the first few chapters was bit slow but then it quickly speed up. the small introduction of the God and Goddess are nice as well. it make me want to know more about them. It had great idea but would need improvement in writing

I really like how the turn of event going, it got a good paced to it. There still a lot room for development of character and I would like to see more of how the Mc deal with his upcoming problems

the story quite entertaining if you familiar with cultivation story. It a fun read

The story is very intriguing, it take from the built up each chapters, the level of description on characters made it easy to imagine them. Look forward to this novel

I really took quite the inspiration from it along with other series.

The way you had set out your world was very ineteresting, the way you set up your two characters side by side is good too. It remind me of Tomb Raider King, each characters had their personality and struggle to deal with. I appreciated the way you set up the story before jump in is the main event. Keep up the good work.

I don't read this type of novel much, so I may not have enough knowledge to proper give it a review 1 the pace is slow, nothing much happened through the chapters 2 why do a guild want to invite a farmer ?   I mean they may look interest but there aren't any real reason to do so.  If you had you should put it in the chapter 3 lack of dialogue,  what make novel does not feel like a long essay is dialogue but the novel is kinda lacking it 4 the card system,  there aren't much explanation about it as well as the consistent about the growing system 5 the guild help the farmer too fast without any real contribution to be seen from the farmer in the early chap. I mean the too good to be true 6 The goal of the Mc somewhat unclear.  I mean it is ok to keep the Mc motive hidden but at least show how his action, motivation affect the world around him to move the plot forward  7 It was weird when you put strengthen defense physiccally and virtually ? What does that mean ?  8 The Mc didn't grow anything much in term of his magic ability but more on the side as of building a business more so I think you may go with the world building route while increasing the nature card abilty 9 I don't feel how this mmorpg affect the world economy much since if you read successful mmorpg, the discover of a potion that can permanent improve stats does cause chaos as well go will a super high price. I mean it does start a war but rather than that I feel it barely had any reaction from the world, people like to read others reaction of something extraordinary 10 it feel weird for someone never experienced fighting was now assign a task as the leader of the defense team 11 if you plan to do a war arc it lack of what you show the audience before the war what the enemy is like, their power, their prepaparation, what kind of threats that could foreshadow a victory for the enemy not just for the Mc and how the Mc plan out his retaliatation more. The victory was so sweep that it hardly feel anything 12 Explaination of unfamiliar terms was lacking such as what is "Boutinful farm" ?  13 His real life interaction was lacking any source of drama or exciting that could made the reader remember at all 14 The power boost was so fast that I couldn't feel where the Mc even struggle at 15 It lack the feeling that the reader feel like they had questions about the Mc, the world around them, the event, what plotwist. In general questions to keep them reading and explore