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Thanks for reading, I'll be posting the new chapter in around a week. 4/5k words.

I admire you sir. I can barely fit in the time...

How do you have time to write all this?

He's an original character. However, there could be some reincarnation type thing when I finish the prologue.

Any criticism?

Thanks for the chapter, the writing is a bit off though.

She -> so

More about the way the story begins and the slight lack of sense in how it unfolds.

I never even thought of that, thank you sir.

Don't worry too much, this is suggestions not selections. Its more of a way to get my head to spark something fun, sadly everyone seems to be picking the same things.