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Dravin_Barnett

Dravin_Barnett

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2021-07-26 BeigetretenUnited States
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    The first four chapters of YIN: Raised by Demons to Slay Gods have been posted. I warn you, it is graphic, and I also assure you, Yuna (the MC) will be the only character I’ve ever made with a chance of beating full power Akuro. Though, the story has a somewhat slowish start, beginning from when she is a child. But you’ll understand why if you read it.

    Ch 95 ~95~ A Trial
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    Well, considering that Akuro is the most powerful character I have ever made, it would be very difficult for Dagon to top that, but I assure you, Dagon will be quite strong.

    Ch 95 ~95~ A Trial
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    Hello! Long time no see, but I figured, since you liked Omnipotent Death, I have a book doing pretty well-better than OD did at the beginning- called KIN. It has a similar style to OD and the MC is op, though he isn’t right off the bat necessarily, but I think you’d like it. Check it out if you are interested, as I have another story coming that is also a lot like OD

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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    I understand, but I really don’t know. I was looking the comments but then this. I am sorry

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    I’m sorry, I actually have no idea

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
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    Oh, I actually do not know. I have not settings for that because I like feedback, so I actually do not know why it would keep you from commenting.

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    I will also say that the story doesn’t start off that amazing but it actually gets pretty in depth and good to the point I’m proud of it in later chapters. The fights get better and the story gets deeper

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    Oh, you right. Well, there is also the fact that I made Akuro as a character that likes and watches anime and he simply went off a guess on how to block off Raijin. Also he has basically two personalities and he is highly intelligent. Though, as the story goes, he becomes more of a brute

    Raijin was waiting for Akuro to say something when he shivered, realizing something. He could not read the human's thoughts any longer. 'Astonishing… within a few short minutes he was able to close off his mind to me… this boy… his potential is boundless if he already has this much aura control.' Raijin smiled. 'He was definitely a wise choice, your majesty!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    Yeah, sadly I used an apple account to write this book, meaning I don’t know how to sign into Inkwell with an apple account so I can’t give this book a cover. I made an alternate account and wrote new books, but I’ve been having a really hard time lately, either nothing compares to this book or it does and it’s just I can’t get through the beginning.

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    Maybe lol

    "My name is Boil. Good night, sir. Rest well." The goblin turned away and strode back the way it came. It was surprisingly fast considering it's size.
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
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    Fair. But at the same time writing a story isnt easy, and I wrote this on mostly a whim from the beginning. I never expected it to be anything great

    'According to their lore, golems are beings conjured of stone and one other element. Although there is always one rule, the ingredients in the making of the golem must include a soul, in other words, if I'm death, I can control souls. I just need to figure out how!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    For certain beings its not the end. Depends on aura level and your being type, such as gods who do cease to exist while normal beings such as mortals/immortals or deities become, well, you’ll see later. I’m sorry I didn’t explain as throughly as I should’ve but I couldn’t explain without spoilers

    "Interesting… so the soul is not the end. Who knows… maybe there is another life beyond the soul?" Akuro theorized.
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    No, the only thing the gods attempted (and failed) to do was limit the power they could wish for by blocking out reality bending, that way the Deities could not surpass them. See how that went

    Raijin then smiled, and that smile then turning into a boisterous laugh. 'This boy… he is… awe inspiring! With this wish he even has the power to kill us gods! Hmm, I must be careful with this one.' Raijin thought. "Alright boy, in the name of the almighty thunder god Raijin, I hereby grant your wish! From here on, you are the Omnipotent Death!"
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    😂no. I personally think “cultivation” is used too much which is why I used something else

    Akuro's dark blue eyes flashed open then in realization. 'That's it! I need a power that will make my strength immense, but also makes me immortal, and I know just the power.' Akuro met Raijin's gaze with his own. "Hey gramps, I know my wish."
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    He wasn’ necessarily meditating at the beginning, simply pondering his life and memories. In the act of meditating he is purposfully blocking out Raijin

    "Alright then, gramps, I accept. So… now what?" Akuro said, tilting his head. 'It seems he can't read my thoughts anymore. So steeling my mind seemed to of worked, who would've thought my meditations would have payed off in the afterlife. Anime rules!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Withian

    The aura granted to him by Raijin plus the ability to view memories of deaths (including gods) allowing him to learn to use aura

    Raijin was waiting for Akuro to say something when he shivered, realizing something. He could not read the human's thoughts any longer. 'Astonishing… within a few short minutes he was able to close off his mind to me… this boy… his potential is boundless if he already has this much aura control.' Raijin smiled. 'He was definitely a wise choice, your majesty!'
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    I will be starting to update this book on Webnovel again. Sorry I’ve been gone so long.

    Ch 93 ~93~Sweet Reverie
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    I try, though, writing can be difficult at times. Some days I feel too exhausted to write, others I get bored of the same idea and want a new one, thus the new story. And it is not purely mystery, it is war and conflict among clans. I’m trying a new writing style for combat as well that has to do with emotion. Not as fast paced, but more detailed and deep.

    Ch 94 ~94~ The Corpse of a Star
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    My ideas are running a bit low, but I did have an idea for a new story. It is called Sinful Creed, if you are interested. I’ve made a new Webnovel account so I could use a cover. I will still update OD here and there, but it will have to be back and forth. My new book is quite different, not nearly on the combat scale of OD, it is more realistic, mostly swordplay. Just wondered if you were interested. Thank you for your support :)

    Ch 94 ~94~ The Corpse of a Star
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  • Dravin_Barnett
    Dravin_Barnett2yr
    Antwortet auf Dragon_above_all

    Imagine if Akuro became a demon

    Ch 92 ~92~ The Dark Kirigon
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